Women's Beauvoir's Change Open United Economic Basic Conclusion

意群训练： Open acknowledgemen t of the existenc e of women's oppression was too radica l for the United State s in the fifties , and Beauvoir's conclusion , that change i n women's economic condition , though insufficien t by itself , “remains the basic factor ” in improvin g women's si-tuation , was particularly unacceptable.

标志： Open acknowledgement ［of the existence (of women's oppression)］was too radical /for the United States in the fifties/, and Beauvoir's conclusion ,［that change (in women's economic condition), though insufficient by itself , but “remains the basic factor” (in improving women's situation)］, was particularly unacceptable .

译文： 公开 ［对（妇女压迫的）存在的］承认 /对于50年代的美国而言/有些过分 激进 ，而且 B的结论 ，［即 （妇女经济状况的）变化 ，尽管它本身不是一个充分的因素 ， 但是 “仍然是 （提高妇女地位的）根本因素 ”的观点 ，是尤其无法令人接受的 。

解释： 本句是由and所连接的两个分句。前一个分句的主语虽然有一些修饰成分，但整体而言还算好读；后面的分句中的修饰成分就比较难读：主语Beauvoir's conclusion 后面被加上了同位语从句that change in...，而且在从句的主语和谓语之间还加了一个插入语；当我们好不容易把同位语从句中的成分补齐，后面又看到系表结构was particularly unacceptable 的时候，想不起来主语是谁，不禁心中茫然；如果是没有练习过难句的人，也只好黯然神伤。