| Front | why is the bolded a crappy subject? The effect of withdrawing CoQ10 and its reversibility on cardiac function was another observation that demonstrates the action of CoQ10 having a therapeutic effect instead of mere coincidence. |
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| Back | The therapeutic effect of CoQ10 [on cardiac function] is further demonstrated by the reversibility of its effects when it is withdrawn. sequence of actions that happened someone given CoQ10 > they had therauptic effect > it was withdrawn jumps several chronological steps into the action, therefore requiring reader to do mental acrobatics |
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