Question

issue with this sentenceShe jogged down the street by the brook in the darkness with no flashlight.

Accepted Answer

too many prepositions—you lose track of the action

split into two sentences and add action

She jogged down the dark street by the brook, her only guide the sound of crickets. Why had she forgotten her flashlight?

Front	issue with this sentence She jogged down the street by the brook in the darkness with no flashlight.
Back	too many prepositions—you lose track of the action split into two sentences and add action She jogged down the dark street by the brook, her only guide the sound of crickets. Why had she forgotten her flashlight?

Jogged Street Action Issue Sentence Brook Darkness Flashlight