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en Federal efforts to aid minority businesses began in the 1960's when the Small Business Administration (SBA) began making federally guaranteed loans and government-sponsored management and technical assistance available to minority business enterprises.
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意群训练: Federal effort s to aid minority businesse s began in the 1960's when th e Small Business Administration (SBA ) began making federally guaranteed loans an d government-sponsored management and technical assistanc e available t o minority business enterprises .

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标志: Federal efforts (to aid minority businesses) began /in the 1960's//when the Small Business Administration (SBA) began making federally guaranteed loans and government-sponsored management and technical assistance available to minority business enterprises/.

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译文: (帮助少数民族企业的)联邦政府的努力 开始 /于20世纪60年代/, /那时 小企业管理机构(简称SBA) 开始使得 联邦担保的贷款 政府资助的管理以及 技术援助 能够为少数民族企业所用。

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解释: 在以when所引导的状语从句中,begin doing something是我们熟知的结构,然而make的宾语不但很长,而且出现了两个相邻的and连接了三个并列的成分,似乎是明显违反语法规则的(按照正常的语法来说,应该是A,B,and C这样的结构),可是本句中的情况却不违反语法,因为这两个and不是同一个层面的东西:第二个and连接的government-sponsored management and technical assistance 是政府的两个资助,而第一个and是连接前面的联邦资助和后面的政府资助,也就是说由于在美国联邦和政府不是一回事,所以第一个and的层面要高于第二个and。

本句另外的一个令人难以读懂的地方就在于, 由于make的宾语过长, 所以make something available这个固定搭配被分开很远, 让人读不出前后的联系。

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